Nothing
Christ is only who saves
When it seems like I can bear no more
Walking through the life that is
Why must I feel the pain?
It is me standing in the rain
Nothing more to say but its His
Jesus is my open door
Even when I am in among the waves
Nothing to say, nothing to do
I know that you can hear me when I cry
My pain, my thought, and my hurt
Jesus, my Savior from sin.
You are the one for whom I rest in.
You breathe life when I was dirt
You listen to me when I sigh
All I can be is for you
Would love some constructive criticism on this and any other of my poems or thoughts. I have been trying to work on different styles. Please feel free to comment. Thanks
When it seems like I can bear no more
Walking through the life that is
Why must I feel the pain?
It is me standing in the rain
Nothing more to say but its His
Jesus is my open door
Even when I am in among the waves
Nothing to say, nothing to do
I know that you can hear me when I cry
My pain, my thought, and my hurt
Jesus, my Savior from sin.
You are the one for whom I rest in.
You breathe life when I was dirt
You listen to me when I sigh
All I can be is for you
Would love some constructive criticism on this and any other of my poems or thoughts. I have been trying to work on different styles. Please feel free to comment. Thanks
Bill,
You really write well. I wonder if you might write something on the salvation of the world and how God wants to bring the Kingdom to earth.
Could you clarify this a little? Just a little more specifics.
Go for it, Bill. Fan the flame within you in this way.
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